You asked for feedback, so here it is. Please take it as constructive criticism.:)
1. Don't focus on only one aspect for each hero. For example, you shouldn't limit your guide to a jungle Naix alone.
2. Account for flexibility. New players tend to stick to recommended item builds, so do clarify the types of situations when certain item pickups are necessary. For a better idea on how to do this, watch Purge cast - he explains each decision he makes in detail, as well as the rationale behind it. The idea behind a guide is to make the reader understand the hero in question and adapt it to the game, not provide a blueprint on how a hero "must" be played.
3. Go the distance - provide useful insights such as comments on suitable levels of aggression in lanes, or speed jungling etc. Videos of yourself doing this would be immensely helpful.
4. Attach a few replays which show you applying what you've written on. Provide highlights on certain events during the replay that you feel the viewer should pay special attention to.
Look forward to seeing an updated version of your guide. Cheers!
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My first guide. hope you enjoy
feedback would be appreciated